Mahsoos Part 80

15 Jan

mahsoos Part 80

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Maans heart did not feel happy, there was annoying restless, like he wanted to shout out something. He wanted to claim everything. Overall he was confused about how to take this frustration out. He quickly changed in to his trouser and went to his normal pushups. Maan was restless about his baby. He wanted to hold him, comfort him… Make geet realize that whatever her thought may be, it’s wrong. He can look after his son and his wife. There were no doubt in that. He trusted him self enough to trust him self with his son. Maan did not show any sign of stoping his push-ups. He had no track of time and wondered how many pushups have he done so far. 100… 200… 250… 300… Why there was no pain yet? His hand did not send out any distress signal! Why? Maan closed his dark eyes and continued with his pushups.

His mind some reason completely ignored who was around him, his mind even ignored the charming noise of geets anklets. His mind even ignored that his pain would heart geet beyond him.

‘maan… Maan! Maan!’ geet shouts over and over again, calling his name to forbid him to continue with his exercise.
Geet bends down to stop him from doing any more push ups.
‘maan, please stop it. You are hurting your self. Please maan!’
His body was crawling with sweat. While both hand showed clear sign of refusal of taking the pain any further.

Maan stops slowly and instantly leans back, than fell flat on his back, breathing rapidly.

‘what’s wrong with you?’ geet snaps at him.

He closed his eyes, in order to inhale much air as possible. She worriedly looked at his fuming chest.

‘maan! What is this? Don’t you feel the pain?, it looks so swore!’ she placed her hand over his bicep, the blood vassal underneath the skin was throbbing. She guessed instantly that his arm was in pain, yet why there was no discomfort displayed on his face.

‘maan… Are you ok?’ he did not reply. His heart was still busy to drive in much blood as possible from body and make its way to the lung.

‘why are you hurting your self?’ geet with little tear looked at him. She held his both cheek, bringing him close, ‘I am here. Face me and say why are you so careless about the pain your hand indicating to!’

Maan could feel her soft yet rapid sweet breath. She was fuming with anger, her heart was throbbing underneath…
Why wasn’t he comforting her?
‘it’s nothing! I am fine!’

Geet looked at his both frozen eyes, there were no reflection let alone a blink. She became used to it, however today those eyes looked like a stranger. She have lost the thought about complaining about her life since she fell in love with him. The word complain had no space in her love. In her life. Because she loves him immensely, thats why today her eyes wanted to complain? Why? Was it because maan’s frustration that no one believes that he can not look after his own child or the frustration that even his own wife thinks like that.

Life hasn’t been exactly a cup of tea for him, but giving your self such pain will prove nothing except hurting her.

‘you are hurting me maan. You are not hurting your self. Why wont you say what’s bothering you?

Maan ignored her question. His angry reaction did not go unnoticed by geet. She silently sat at the position she was in, observing maan as he stood up and walked off.

Geet in dilemma looked at his disappearing body. She came back to the bedroom, baby was still with avantika. The room looked reasonably clean. She wondered what to do to make maan feel comfortable again.

Geet walked out silently with a miserable face. Annys door was open, and in her surprise she was busy talking to armaan. She smiled.

‘bhabi!’ anny instantly spines around. Geet. Confusingly looks at her.
‘how did you know?’
‘your ankle bracket!’

Geet looks down on her feet. Maan’s present. She smiled and looked back at anny.
‘talking to armaan?’
Anny cuts the call instantly. ‘I will talk to him later. What’s wrong?’

‘au…’ geet bits her lips. Wondering how to start a conversation.
‘maan is mad at me!’ she walked in slowly, sitting at the edge of annys bed.
‘is it about our little angel?’
Geet nodes. ‘yes!… Au…’ she wasn’t sure how to explain.

‘you know, I am extremely carless, but bro is million times better than me!’

Geet observed anny for few minutes. She was right, god knows how many time she have encountered anny tripping, falling! But maan, he always have been active, he sees the world with closed eyes. What she was thinking about? How can she doubt on him?

‘I felt how family was behaving! I think it was unnecessary! I bet dad is fuming at the moment! Specially at mum!’

Geet instantly understood the arguments that mum and dad were having about. Geet felt more guilty knowing, if she spoke out that no, maan is fine… No one would have bothered thinking about this situation twice! Uff…

Geet bit her lips… In wonder how to fix this problem. She thought about shopping, shopping was the best idea to start with & in this way maan will also feel connected with there baby.

‘how is your health bhabi?’

‘healing!’ she smiled.
‘and how is our little angel? I already made list of name!’ she smiled.
‘you chose one and than I will let maan know!’


Posted by on January 15, 2013 in MAHSOOS-



34 responses to “Mahsoos Part 80

  1. seemamary

    January 15, 2013 at 7:14 pm

    Awesome dear, just loved it.

    • FireSafireFire- all story (C)

      January 15, 2013 at 7:19 pm

      thank you :)xx

  2. preethi

    January 15, 2013 at 7:50 pm

    loved the update
    finally geet realizing her mistake of letting him down in front of the family

  3. Ayesha

    January 15, 2013 at 7:53 pm

    Amazing update…
    Poor maan….hope geet pacifies him…

  4. suzie

    January 15, 2013 at 8:05 pm

    marvelous update
    good that geet realize her mistake

  5. pinkybedi

    January 15, 2013 at 8:15 pm

    This is one of the most intense n emotional FF on MG…………
    I truly adore reading it

  6. Najiah's Naina

    January 15, 2013 at 8:15 pm

    Nyc Update,,
    maan is upset with all of his family behavior specially Geet too..
    let see Geet’s plan work or not…
    chalo acha hai.. anny clear geet doubts about handling baby…
    waiting for next & plz update Animosity too

  7. dia0n

    January 15, 2013 at 8:32 pm

    Maan is more hurt coz of geet behavior … hope she fix it soon

  8. -Ru-

    January 15, 2013 at 9:05 pm

    Awesome babe….poor maan..feellin’ bad fo him 😦

  9. dilsay

    January 15, 2013 at 9:08 pm

    I am so happy to know that now you will be posting your updates in ur blog.
    You have beautifully written the kashmakash of Maneet .
    So do you think shopping would ease the pain .I highly doubt,…….In this situation the mistrust on Maan’s capability to handle the baby from Geet and his family’s is logical .Now It will only be Geet who could make Maan melow down …

    Are you also going to update your Ajeeb Dastan here?

    • FireSafireFire- all story (C)

      January 15, 2013 at 9:56 pm

      Dilsay… Kasmakas is muskis ff… Hehe… Yes.. From 2moro.. Ajeeb dasta will be up on blog to.. 🙂 and well shopping.. Hmm u have to read hehe

  10. anjalisen

    January 15, 2013 at 9:34 pm


  11. Mariam

    January 15, 2013 at 11:23 pm

    awesome update der

  12. trs1391

    January 16, 2013 at 1:07 am

    geet understanding maan pain and silence

  13. lynnkaur94

    January 16, 2013 at 1:46 am

    awesome update

  14. idunno

    January 16, 2013 at 2:11 am

    nice one sounds real hope geet can convince maan

  15. Nandy

    January 16, 2013 at 3:00 am

    Loved it

    Poor maan and helpless geet

  16. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 16, 2013 at 3:14 am

    awesome update poor maan is feeling angry and insecure because how every one is treating him glad geet realize what was going on loved the update

  17. audiwalia

    January 16, 2013 at 4:31 am

    Yeah i feel bad 4r maan to yaar ….. Anyways i think geet will handle him….. Awesome part ….
    So u now on u will update on ur blog only??? Wats with the new id i think i’ll manage with th FB i guess nd plus i already bookmarked this blog….lol…..

  18. Madhuri

    January 16, 2013 at 4:54 am

    Glad that geet understood her mistake
    Baby’s shopping is best idea to bring him back
    But I feel first she has to manaofy maan

  19. tabby

    January 16, 2013 at 5:13 am

    lovely update
    now geet understanding what maan want
    soon on shopping
    hope to see happy maneet together

  20. Eza sk

    January 16, 2013 at 5:44 am

    Nice part keya….
    Hope geet understand his pain… 😦 😦

  21. Amruta Joshi

    January 16, 2013 at 8:31 am

    Awesome update..
    At last geet realized the reason behind Maan’s frustration
    loved it

  22. aali

    January 16, 2013 at 11:51 am

    so good of u anny! jitna akhal aur nazar tumme hain utni avantika mein nahien
    chalo geet ko samajh mein toh aaya.

  23. kirannn

    January 16, 2013 at 12:20 pm

    beautiful update
    atlast u updated
    missing ur ffs like hell
    please please update animosity and all other ffs dear
    missing them

  24. crazydream

    January 16, 2013 at 1:12 pm

    Maan silent, angry n frustrated. He feels like a lost soul. Like no One believes him n have trust On him. I m completely on his Side. He is capable more than Any human.

    Geet pained to see him like this Punishing himself. Trying hard to Stop him. She is still not getting Wat he feels exactly.

    Talking to Annie. Surprised to See Her talking wid Armaan. Soon something wil be up
    Between them. Annie telling Maan’s state as she herself can Understand wat he is going thru.
    Geet understanding everything N wants to uplift Maan’s mood By shopping. I think its baby Shopping. She wants him to
    include un dat.

  25. Pooja

    January 16, 2013 at 2:17 pm

    awesome update
    thank god anny clear all d douwbts geet had for maan regarding their baby
    let see if her plan works or not

  26. ravrash

    January 16, 2013 at 5:48 pm


  27. ushankitvc

    January 17, 2013 at 5:10 am

    awesum updt…maan is upset with evryone specially geet…hope geet can manaofy him soon….thanx fr the blog link…..

  28. spvd

    January 17, 2013 at 7:02 am

    part 80
    nice part………..
    poor Maan……………
    Geet should know hes the father and he would be very careful now…………

    Deepa (spvd)

  29. kirannn

    February 3, 2013 at 5:18 am

    poor maan
    nice update
    next part soon dear

  30. kirannn

    May 19, 2013 at 8:04 pm

    updaaaaaate plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  31. Anonymous

    August 19, 2013 at 6:15 pm

    Awesum.. missed your FF’s had long break from all social networks.. now feeling gud reading your FF’s

  32. indiegirl1

    January 16, 2017 at 10:54 pm

    Love it that you are back with Mahsoos and love Geet and Maans understanding in this ff, the little angel will bring them more close although right now Maan is a little angry with Geet but she is his love and knows how to get Maan to forget his self inflicted pain and be involved with her in loving their little son….


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