Mahsoos part 81

16 Jan

part 81

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Geet smiled and left the room in deep thought about how to make up with maan. He wasn’t willing to listen let alone have little sweet talk. She couldn’t even make up with kissing, knowing that will lead them to the bed! Geet instantly felt embarrassed, knowing maan, he loves taking time to cress each part of her body. She blocked the thought.

Geet walked in to the kitchen where other family member was busy either eating or preparing food with chef.

Avantika was no where to be seen, she questioned one of her aunty. ‘where is mum?’
‘I really don’t know beta. Last time I saw her with the baby…’

Geet pulled a face and walked out of the kitchen. Vicky walked in, with few shopping bags.

‘vicky!’ geet shouts across the hall. Wondering what was he holding.

‘what’s this?’
‘hi bhabi! Au… Mum told me to buy cloths for our new member! So!’

Vicky walked off. Geet pulled a face. She wanted to do that with maan. Maan would have loved that idea. Why no one would bother letting her know what’s going on with her own child?

Geets mind instantly went back to maan and he probably felt the same when she and other family member took his child way from him! ‘no! No! Maan won’t feel that bad!’ geet lied to her self. She was already worried enough about maan’s anger and now the feeling of the absence of there baby…

Geet hated the thought.

She went to avantika’s room, flowing vicky. Her baby was there, all showered, avantika was massaging him with baby oil. He could barely open his small eyes. It was perfect reflection of maan. He looked just to adorable. Oh how she wished maan could see him.

‘au mum… He might be hungry! It’s been about 1 hour!’ geet informed avantika.

‘I think you are right…’ avantika kissed the baby. ‘I have showered him, and messaged him. ‘it’s very important. I remember maan having the same dry skin!’

Avantika worriedly told geet. Geet nodes, picking her baby and walked back to her room, Wondering where maan was. She looked at the angel.. ‘now you will be with papa. He is really angry you know! Even angry with your mum!’ she could here maan in the study, busy with something.
‘baby and mama will go out with papa today! To do shopping of course! I will make sure papa have no money left at the end!’ geet pulled a face. He barely understood but, geet was busy looking at angry maan who was reading something. She came by and sat next to him, elbowing him.
‘baby wants to be in papa’s arm now!’

Maan completely ignored her.
‘baby is complaining! & complaining why mum and dad is not buying me new cloths!’

Baby instantly made little noise which did not fail to attract maan’s attention.

Maan was angry. Hell angry that how geet could do such thing. Why geet did not stop his mum to try keeping there baby way. But the little angel’s noise, he just couldn’t ignore as his ear flew open with his one little noise. The warmth of his new born baby was to close that he couldn’t ignore. This is his baby. He felt like an animal that with smell he could say this is his baby. He smiled within.

His pain and anger vanished instantly as the small little hand brushed against his painful bicep. Maan wanted to hold him instantly however he avoided. Knowing geet might mind as well.

‘baby is angry! Why papa is not taking him!’ he hard geets pleading voice and of-course her plead to make him feel better! How can he ignore that thought? Yet his other mind was still in dilemma that they doubt on him!

This doubt wasn’t the first time however there was different level of pain that he just couldn’t explain.

‘baby madly wants papa! Other wise baby will cry!’

Maan had little smile at the corner of his face which was he trying his best to hide. But by now geet probably have experienced the smile.

Geet came closer, almost putting baby on maan’s lap. He just couldn’t ignore at the end as he held his little angel, but that does not mean he is alright with geet! Her refusal and not supportive behavior have hurt maan immensely.

Geet circled her hand around maan’s back, resting her head on his shoulder. Maan did not react to her hug, he always loved her close proximity, and with each passing day, he loves her even more…

‘baby is wondering…’ geet took her hand an placed it maan’s chest… ‘wondering… Is papa still mad at mum?’
She pulled a face while looking at maan.
‘baby, please do inform mum, she will require to spend a lot of time to make dad happy again!’
Maan did not bother facing geet. He looked straight at the opposite wall… Creasing his baby…

… As the night fall, another few nights of restless sleep, and another few days of avantika being over protective which only made maan restless.

Geet crawled in to maan’s lap after placing there baby in the cot. ‘he is becoming used to it!’
‘why don’t you sleep, I will keep an eye on him!’
Geet smiled, kissing maan’s cheek. For past few nights he have been looking after there baby very well, however her heart was still doubting maan and she hated that idea. She couldn’t just remove that pointless thought and her other half was trying its best not to show her selfish self to him. She rests her head on maan’s chest as he embraced her in his hug.

‘au… It’s been two weeks now and we still don’t have a name for him!’ geet played with maan’s shirt button… Slowly unbuttons them and gently creasing his exposed chest with tip of her finger. Her one leg rested in-between his.
‘why don’t you ask mum? As she is doing everything!’ he annoyingly replied.
‘per… Baby is our na! So we have to decide his name…’

She observed maan’s restless face. There was temptation of making love yet he was controlling.

She came by, softly placing her hand on his face. ‘it’s been two weeks!’ she slowly whispered… ‘and as we are free, baby is sleeping… …..



Posted by on January 16, 2013 in MAHSOOS-



39 responses to “Mahsoos part 81

  1. neetudd

    January 16, 2013 at 1:46 pm

    awesome update
    plz no mu between maaneet

  2. dia0n

    January 16, 2013 at 2:05 pm

    awesome update .. !!!

  3. neel

    January 16, 2013 at 2:09 pm

    nice part wow waiting 4 next what will maan do an what about mom

  4. Pooja

    January 16, 2013 at 2:24 pm

    awesome update

  5. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 16, 2013 at 2:29 pm

    awesome update maan mother needs to understand maan loves his child and needs to spend time with the baby and stop taking there baby from them loved the update loved how geet was taling and complaining to he baby about his dad awesome update beautifully done

  6. preethi

    January 16, 2013 at 2:46 pm

    loved the update
    feel bad that even geet is not supportive

  7. neethuraj

    January 16, 2013 at 2:57 pm

    superb update.

  8. anjana

    January 16, 2013 at 2:58 pm

    love you! its just too good the way you express maan’s feeling.

  9. Meena

    January 16, 2013 at 3:26 pm

    awsome dear

  10. idunno

    January 16, 2013 at 3:27 pm

    some suggestion for child’s name- milan, moksha, manan, gautam, maneet, ahesas,aryan, etc.

  11. trs1391

    January 16, 2013 at 3:29 pm


  12. sweet scorpio

    January 16, 2013 at 3:34 pm


  13. seemamary

    January 16, 2013 at 3:55 pm

    Amazing one, i think avantika should let the baby spend time with maan and geet also during the day.

  14. Ayesha

    January 16, 2013 at 3:57 pm

    Superb update..
    Maan mom is irritating….

  15. Saro

    January 16, 2013 at 5:42 pm

    Super dear

  16. ravrash

    January 16, 2013 at 5:55 pm

    awesome update
    now Geet has two children
    one is baby n other is baby’s father

  17. janvi

    January 16, 2013 at 6:23 pm

    gr8 part..

  18. suzie

    January 16, 2013 at 6:28 pm

    simply beautiful update

  19. tabby

    January 16, 2013 at 7:59 pm

    lovely update
    wish maan jaldi maan jaye
    avantika must understand maan persepective
    waiting for next

  20. jannatamaaneetparadise

    January 17, 2013 at 12:15 am

    Great update as usual.. have to say not liking avantika atm.. Could understand Maan’s pov, no one seems to understand not even geet šŸ˜¦
    She should trust hubby lol I must be the biggest hypocrite, I myself didn’t trust my husband to pick my son, and he isn’t blind.. So I totally understand where Geet comes from, she’s a mother afterall… so sweet Geet’s returning to her old mischievous self pacifying hubby with different approach… Now He has to forgive her… Like the name Ahan, coz the others r very commonly used.. I’m guessing you like ranbir and rishabh alot, coz most ff’s of urs have this name alot.. (jus saying by the way, not meant to offend you) šŸ˜€ anyways continue soon.. plus waiting for Heartbeats eagerly!!!

    • firesafirefiree

      January 17, 2013 at 7:59 am

      Thank u fornthe lovely comment… šŸ™‚
      Hehe… I think all mothr is like that…. My pov.
      They r over protective nd have there valid pov 2 like maan.. Me wonder what will happen next xx

  21. mandy15

    January 17, 2013 at 4:23 am

    awesome dear:)

  22. Madhuri

    January 17, 2013 at 5:12 am

    Why avantika is over possessive about child….which irritates maan….geet knows this and loved how she tried to manaofy him with the help of baby
    Hope geet will do something so that maan & his mom both will be happy

  23. kirannn

    January 17, 2013 at 5:16 am

    awesome update superb one

  24. ushankitvc

    January 17, 2013 at 5:16 am

    awesum updt…maan yet angry on avantika….loved the baby and maneet indirect convo…updt soon…

  25. aali

    January 17, 2013 at 5:29 am

    geet really needs to work hard patav maan.. oh i just love it superb dear!.
    avantika mum.. lagta papa se ek aur daant khani padi gei aap ko!

  26. Najiah's Naina

    January 17, 2013 at 5:31 am

    Ye Get both naughty hai.. 2 weeks main hi.. šŸ˜›
    I like efforts by Geet to remove pointless doubts about taking care of baby…
    yes plz koi naam rakho…. šŸ˜€
    I know Geet sab thek karedegi…

  27. -Ru-

    January 17, 2013 at 6:09 am

    Awesome Party..Loved it šŸ™‚

  28. spvd

    January 17, 2013 at 7:04 am

    part 81
    nice part…………
    his mom is getting over possessive………..
    cont soon dear…………

    Deepa (spvd)

  29. Amy

    January 17, 2013 at 2:27 pm

    Awesome Update
    Continue Soon
    Thank You So Much For The PM

  30. crazydream

    January 18, 2013 at 6:34 am

    Geet finding Vicky wid full of shopping. Her plan cancelled. She now understand hw it feels like to be ignored frm her own baby works n doings.

    Taking baby frm mom. Manofying Maan. That part was so sweet. Her wsy of talking it looks like d baby was speaking.
    Maan cudnt ignore his little life.

    Avantika continues wid her obsessive nature. I hope someone or other breaks their silence n give Maan his baby.

    Now atlast Geet using her tactics. Innocently Seducing him.

  31. sanjana

    February 4, 2013 at 1:05 pm

    wow loved it
    ahhh why is avantika so overprotective
    loved it

  32. karam80

    May 1, 2014 at 12:09 pm

    Superbbbbb ff….i just read it in one go…..but i can’t read some part which u transfer in blog not in IF…..i can’t found there link….plzzzz can u post proper link of dis ff on ur blog from 1st part to till now…….


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