mahsoos part 82

17 Jan

She observed maan’s restless face. There was temptation of making love yet he was controlling.

She came by, softly placing her hand on his face. ‘it’s been two weeks!’ she slowly whispered… ‘and as we are free, baby is sleeping… Our little one to one time can be an opetion!’ she seductively spoke in maan’s ear.

Maan was frustrated enough and now this? She knew well he can’t control, she knew well that they are having arguments than why she was hell bent to make love? Does she realize… His love is a way of showing how much he loves her… It’s just not for pleasure! Maan did not like that thought at all. That thought not suppose to ring in his head. That thought not suppose to even knock on his door!

‘i am tired geet!’ maan slowly slipped down under the duvet and spines around facing his back on geet.

Geet confusingly stared at him! That wasn’t like maan. Her maan would have given in instantly, her maan would have enjoyed each and every touch from tip of her finger! That wasn’t her maan at all.

The night went by quietly. Her restlessness was completely visible in her sleep. Her thought kept ringing in, she thought everything was fine, she did her best, if mama does something odd how can she help.

‘couldn’t she refuge?’ maan told him self. When he refuged couldn’t she support? That was maan’s question. He never trusted anyone after his dad except geet. Than she couldn’t be more like his dad!

Geet stared at maan’s back in dark. Wondering where she went wrong. His silence was bothering her, why she couldn’t mahsoos what he really thought.

Geet slowly slides her hand on maan’s back, and than comes even closer to hug him.

‘maan…’ she slowly whispered. ‘I am confused! What do you want me to do?’

Maan didn’t reply to her question. He pretended to be sleep. Geet slowly sat up and looked over. Silly her! She was talking to he self.

Geet couldn’t even wake up properly when avantika walked in. The bed was empty and maan have long left. She wondered where.

As the morning turned in to afternoon, there was another buzz in the atmosphere as armaan’s parents rang for annys hand. She was delighted and geet knew well this news to maan would defiantly make him happy.

Anny in embarrassment walked in to her room. She called armaan fast to congratulate.

‘I just hard the news, how come you did not inform me before?’ geet smiled as she walked around the great hall. ‘we are eventually becoming relative!’

Armaan laughed on the other side. ‘but I have something very important to say geet and you have to help me!’ armaan’s laughter disappeared with little worry tone. ‘au, I did not mentioned to mum and dad that anny have no eye sight!’

Geet’s laughter instantly disappeared. ‘what?’
‘I was scared and I love anny to much! I- I can’t here a refusal from them!’
‘armaan this is ridicules! I remember how angry maan was! Please tell your parents otherwise if this…’ geet looked down from her staircase and to the all honesty the whole house was celebrating now how far can this go. It already is spreading!


Posted by on January 17, 2013 in MAHSOOS-


22 responses to “mahsoos part 82

  1. suzie

    January 17, 2013 at 8:26 pm

    amazing update

  2. jannatamaaneetparadise

    January 17, 2013 at 8:51 pm

    <3<3,3Loved It<3<3<3 Brilliant update but Maan is being a little harsh, because it wasn't exactly Geet's fault and Avantika she's really creating MU without any knowledge.. šŸ˜¦
    Jus thinking is that how some MIL are Lol…
    I wonder what happened between his parents??? That's still a mystery..
    Armaan and Annie, oops he hasn't told his parents yet.. before it was parents not telling the child now its child not telling parents..
    Wonder what else you've got up your sleeves???
    I know it may sound weird but I want them to have a full on argument, because no marriage is a cake walk especially after having a child, though its beautiful n all its difficult.. I want them to confront their inner emotions out in the open so they walk from there.. Anyways up to you how you proceed… Can't wait for the next update now… Hope its soon… Once again terrific update!!!<3

    • firesafirefiree

      January 17, 2013 at 9:06 pm

      Your wish may just come true… Lol
      Hahah i cant belive u want arguments… Aww u r just too good. Lol
      And yep i wonder what will happen as armaan did not say anything..
      What is mil?


      Hehe thank you

      • jannatamaaneetparadise

        January 17, 2013 at 11:45 pm

        MIL- mother in law
        if my wish comes true, you’ll find me commenting on every mahsoos update, I’ll In Sha Allah try to comment on the others whenever I have time, couldn’t comment before :/
        you know arguments are healthy in relationships, it relieves you of pent up
        I dont think there is anyone who hasn’t had arguments, if they haven’t then that just means either they’re damn lucky or they’re completely delusional or simply they forgot they argued.. hehe
        Armaan has jus gone crazy!!! more like stupid… idiots only going to create problems in his and annie’s life along with that Maan can even blame geet if it comes down to the worse.. so hoping that doesn’t happen… will be waiting for the next šŸ˜€ x

      • firesafirefiree

        January 18, 2013 at 10:00 pm

        thank you so much for all ur lovely comment.. and mIL … lol i will use that to..
        i hope not all MIL is like her.. although she is nice.. but.. umm

  3. Ayesha

    January 17, 2013 at 8:52 pm

    Superb update…
    Hope geet understands maan….

  4. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 17, 2013 at 9:18 pm

    getting angry with Geet know from the girl who has always known maan emotions and his feeling she is not understanding him at all now poor Maan he is he needs to speck expecting a show down very soon and Arman parent does not know about Anny awesome update beautifully done

  5. trs1391

    January 17, 2013 at 10:56 pm


  6. seemamary

    January 18, 2013 at 5:04 am

    Superb one…… Just loved it.

  7. madhuri53

    January 18, 2013 at 5:53 am

    Maan still very angry on geet…he wnated geet to protest his mother…he wanted her support….but geet failed to understand what he wanted….

    OMg….what armaan did…all are happy of alliance bet armaan & anny….but he did not tell his parents that anny is blind….

    I fear hearing this news maan will be more angry

  8. kirannn

    January 18, 2013 at 7:11 am

    lovely update but short one
    cont soon dear

  9. crazydream

    January 18, 2013 at 8:08 am

    Maan doesn’t like Geet’s behavior. Here he is upset n she is thinking abt luv making. No one can understand him. I hope he raises his point in front of everyone n fight. Geet confused. Avantika is bossy nowadays.
    Annie ka rishta. Opps Armaan didnt tell his parents properly abt Annie. Another round of drama wil happen. N I wil sit n enjoy.
    Armaan is buddhu. He shud tell his parents as its a sensitive topic. Geet gussa on Armaan. Now wat wil happen????

  10. Najiah's Naina

    January 18, 2013 at 8:40 am

    Nyc update/// but ye kia… Armaan Anny part.. he didnt tell to his parents…. I know tension create hone wali hai…//
    Maaneet relation also on steak…. Maan indifferent behavior…
    Waiting for hungama… šŸ˜‰

  11. Pooja

    January 18, 2013 at 12:21 pm

    awesome update
    armaan didnt tell his parents dat anny is blind. this thing is going to create some problems b/w d two family

  12. ashwini

    January 18, 2013 at 1:25 pm

    poor geet… she s so much in confusion… !!
    hope soon geet makes maan comfortable…happy…lovable as b4…
    thanks for the sooner updates…

  13. Dsonia

    January 18, 2013 at 10:19 pm

    Nice update
    Loved it
    Continue soon

  14. mungaru

    July 15, 2013 at 10:23 am

    Please update soon
    eagerly waiting 4 next update

  15. karam80

    February 28, 2015 at 2:38 am

    Superbbbb update….feelinggg sad 4 Maan …he can’t see or even play with his own son….He felt soooo helpless…

  16. karam80

    May 2, 2015 at 5:36 pm

    Waitinggggg 4 next part dear…..continue soon…


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