repulsive part 2

18 Jan


Short Story
part 2

Maan walked in to his room, which looked different. His bedroom light was off and his wife was fast to sleep…

Geet woke up early morning and found Maan on the other side of the bed, sleeping peacefully. She quickly made her way to the bathroom and before Maan could even say a proper hello, she was out of the room. House looked resonantly empty, the decoration were still up, beautiful… Nice. She smiled and made her way downstairs, she found her mother in law, telling few servant what to do.

Geet slowly made her way, ‘can I help with anything?’ she respectfully asked Avantika.

‘oh, you are up so early…’ Avantika smiled, while brushing her hair back as a blessing.
‘yea… I thought, you might need some help!’

‘ no-no beta. Your first day. Let me show you around the house.’ Avantika walked around with Geet, showing each and everything to her, Geet was pretty happy with the huge place, it was truly beautiful. Everything were specially designed for different occasion.

you have a very nice house!’ Geet smiled.
‘it’s your now!’ Avantika corrected. ‘I hard you have to go back to London next Monday!’ Geet nodes. ‘I know, medicine, you are a bright girl, and I am glad I have chose you for my Maan. Specially he only have brain how to run his fathers business!’
but that’s a different talent and every person have hidden talents within them!’ Geet smiled, unknowingly defending her husband, but she would say that in anyone’s case.
Avantika smiled, first day of there weeding and already so defensive.

Geet later met her younger sister in law. Maans younger brother, dev’s wife. It was love marriage apparently! It was nice to see that this family have open view however Avantika’s attitude towards Naintara made her think again.

‘Naintara, make sure you wake your husband up on time today. It’s first day for Geet!’

Naintara gave one of the dirtiest look to Geet, she forcefully smile. She never in life experienced such dirty look! Let alone someone talking to her like that.

Geet walked in to her room after few hours, finding the bed empty… Little messy. She thought about cleaning the bed up, but before she could start the servant hurriedly came in and cleaned everything. Living in London she never had servant or servants, so the sight of them were making her feel little uneasy, and they were like human robots! Gosh!

Geet looked around while the room became tinkle clean, within ten minutes and empty, with her standing in the middle of the bed room. Maan walked out from bathroom, wearing only a Tracy, Geet looked at him once, he had proper 6 pack, she instantly spines her self. Biting her lower lips. ‘I am sorry! Oh… I didn’t realize-that!’

Maan observed her embarrassing back and hurriedly poped his top on, remembering, he is married now. & this room belongs to two of them.

He looked around than back at Geets back. Realizing, she had English accent! ‘umm…- so -you-have English accent!’ he looked around, wondering how to start a conversation. ‘you are from England right!’

Geet nodes with her back.
‘you can turn around. I am wearing cloths!’

I have to go!’ Geet tried to walk out of the long room, but Maan stopped her.
‘I am Maan!… I don’t even know your name!’

Geet looked back with little surprise! She wrinkled her forehead, thinking what this odd person is talking about? Should she take that as an insult. It was indeed a great start to this wedding.

Maan knew that conversation was heading towards wrong direction. ‘it’s traditional!-‘ he lifted an eye brow up… ‘traditional that I only get to here my wife’s name from her lips!’

Geet pulled an eye brow up, to question his weird tradition further, than calmed down, thinking, why did she say yes to this marriage?

Geet! It’s Geet-‘ she bit her lips for his sir name. She wasn’t sure about her new sir name now. Even he probably have mentioned few minutes back or someone els…

Khurana!’ Maan corrected her.

Geet gave out a smile, before her phone started to vibrate in her hand. ‘excuse me!’

Maan gently nodes, seeing a Geet disappear to there living room.

Geet took sit on the sofa, while answering her phone… ‘hi..’

‘where are you?’ the phone screamed over in to her ear. ‘for past months I had seriously no contact with you. What happen?’

Geet rubbed her head. She have been so busy that she almost have forgotten about her friends in uk.
‘what happen? I hope your parents haven’t forcefully married you off or something!’


‘anyway, there is some early accommodation, and you have to be here by next Monday, so pack your bag, pack everything… And catch the flight for this Friday. You have to be here soon as possible, if you fancy getting decent accommodation. I seriously do not like to visit that old lady’s house again. It was to clean man!’

Geet started to giggle, when Maan caught the glimpse. Geet looked at him. ‘oh sorry… It’s my friend!’

Maan smiled, saying its alright with his eyes and walked out for her privacy.

‘who was that?’ the phone spoke again.

‘my hus…’

firstly thank you so much for all the lovely comments…
i only managed to reply half of you…
๐Ÿ™‚ wil do the res now..
thank you thank you so much…
i really do need your support… i might update another part but i require your support to motivate me…

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Posted by on January 18, 2013 in Repulsive


18 responses to “repulsive part 2

  1. NoOn

    January 18, 2013 at 10:04 pm

    nice update
    oh so maan din’t knw here name weird tradition lol
    wld luv 2 see more sence of maaneet 2gdr
    nd know more abt maan coz till now v don’t knw much abt him
    nd how he is taking dz marrige
    thank u 4 update safi :*
    nd yaaa plzzz update soon dear vll be v8ing ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • firesafirefiree

      January 18, 2013 at 10:09 pm

      very true… hmm lets see what we discover about him… me wont say anything.. 16 more parts to go.. and u will find out ๐Ÿ˜€
      and u welcome… ๐Ÿ˜€

      • NoOn

        January 18, 2013 at 10:14 pm

        16pt more me v8ing 4 it ^_*

  2. Dsonia

    January 18, 2013 at 10:09 pm

    Nice update….
    Loved it
    Maaneet little starting convo….
    MIL was sweet n loving her….
    Eagarly waiting…[8->]
    Continue soon

  3. jannatamaaneetparadise

    January 18, 2013 at 10:56 pm

    This Maan is a mystery, does he want to have a go at this marriage or not??? Geet definitely doesn’t, she planned it from part 1 itself hehe
    Already taking hubby’s side, Avantika seems nice, why’s NT a bitch for?
    Their first encounter was a little awkward for both of them, he doesn’t even know her name ๐Ÿ™‚ and Geet she’s still wondering why she married him, i’m sure she’ll find out soon enough why?
    I don’t understand these traditions, is there really such a tradition saying your name Lol
    I was actually thinking about the name of this ss, why is it called repulsive? coz there is no disgust type of feeling between them, they hardly know each other, has it got something to do with the future track, or are u using a diff meaning of repulsive, like repel or something.. hmm m thinking too much, my mind is a little too curious Lol
    Hope to see more MG moments..
    please update next one soon.. will be waiting ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. trs1391

    January 19, 2013 at 12:59 am


  5. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 19, 2013 at 2:36 am

    awesome update they really don’t know anything about each other at all love how the story is unfolding nintra as always a bitch can’t wait to read more

  6. ushankitvc

    January 19, 2013 at 2:59 am

    awesum updt…strange tradition…both didnt even know the name of their partners….so she will b going to london fr hr remaining studies…thats nice…continue soon….

  7. audiwalia

    January 19, 2013 at 4:35 am

    Its sweet…….maan is kinda sweet guy….as it seems…. I hope they atleast start talking..

  8. nandy

    January 19, 2013 at 4:37 am

    loved it

    maneet interaction so cute

  9. Madhuri

    January 19, 2013 at 9:17 am

    Awesoem part…

    Loved their intro…ufff….they even did not know each others’ name

    Loved his trick of tradition to her name

    Seems he is ok with her…but she still not ready to accept him as her husband …And she will not tell about him to her friends at london

  10. Ayesha

    January 19, 2013 at 11:15 am

    Awesome update

  11. neethuraj

    January 19, 2013 at 2:49 pm

    nice part.

  12. arjuhi4

    January 19, 2013 at 5:32 pm

    As always lovely update…gud concept:-)

  13. crazydream

    January 19, 2013 at 5:37 pm



    Geet avoiding Maan as much as she can. Avantika surprised to see her early. I don’t like d way NT is behaving. Geet liking Avantika nature. N she talking abt Geet’s study. I think she might allow her as she was speaking.

    Geet n Maan face to face for first time. Maan initiating convo wid her. Maan is not that bad as I thought. Means he seems ready for this marriage.

    Geet seems confused. She doesn’t know how to interact wid him.
    Maan enchanted by Geet’s laughter.

    Eagerly waiting for next update.
    Continue soon.

  14. ritzy09

    January 21, 2013 at 12:32 pm

    they didn’t even know each other’s name..come on keya…yaar itna backward bhi nahi hai India…..arranged marriage hai toh aisa thodayi na hota hai…somehow found it a little hard to believe….

  15. 123fiza1

    February 9, 2013 at 8:49 pm

    wht a trdition….
    thank you….


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