repulsive part 3

19 Jan
Short Story
part 3

Maan my hus…’
‘anyway… Yes the house was to clean!’
‘everything is to clean for you. You are so messy!’
‘Geet nodes her head in disbelief, and walks up to her cupboard for her side bag where she had her passport. She took her red passport out, and looked over for the purse and the card inside. Than she took her apple laptop, to book the ticket online.
‘I am just looking for Internet connection, umm… I will call you back soon as when the ticket is confirmed. I hope it’s a decent place. Is it near university?’
‘yes very close to the university!’
‘near medi campus?’
‘yes baba!’
‘ok… I will call you back soon!’

Geet cuts her call, leaving the laptop and her passport along with her card on the bed, wondering where is Maan. She wanted to tell him before booking her tickets. She pulled a face as there room was empty, plus she wanted to know where was his wifi connections & password.

Geet pulled a face than walked back, she wondered around for a while when eventually her eyes fell on the Internet connection box.

Geet booked her tickets, non-return one. She wanted to let the family know that she will be leaving, Friday, 6am.

Geet felt extremely bad and uneasy that her marriage first day in this house and she is already planning to leave. Actually it’s confirmed that she will be gone by this Friday. So this left her with 3 days in this house.

A servant walked in to call her for breakfast, Geet made her way down.

Breakfast table was full of people, she wondered how this big family lives together? Maan was sitting on the head chair, busy eating, and her chair was just next to him. She silently sat down, with variety of breakfast. She took orange juice than a toast. Her apatite wasn’t allowing her to any more. Maan just looked at Geet with surprise and rest of the table.

I – usually -don’t -eat breakfast!’ Geet forcefully smiled to answer everyone’s questioning face.


‘that’s bad!’ Naintara distracted. ‘bhabi-ji!’
Geet felt odd with such responsible name. She is only 21.
‘a medical student, and you should know better than us!’
Maan instantly looked up. She was actually smart. ‘medical student?’ he suppose to whisper, but his whisper was to loud. Everyone looked at him with little surprise.

‘debar-ji… That’s bad. I thought with the lost night… You probably have exchanged many lost words. But that’s clearly not the case!’ Naintara pulled her eye brow up in a disbelieving manner, than looked back at Geet and her body to observe any unwanted mark. But simply there were nun. Naintara smiles… ‘seems like… Rath ki sath.. bath bhi baki hi…

Geet looked down in embarrassment, knowing exactly what she was hinting towards. She avoided Maan’s eyes, who she can see was on her.

I am finished!’ Maan snaps and walks off. Geet looks at his disappearing figure than at her mother in law, who barely looked bothered about the whole incident. She smiled at Geet and told her to finish her food.

Geet was hesitating to enter her bedroom after the unwanted incident at the dinner table. Was making out or body pleasure this important? She questioned her self. She have grown up seeing her friends adultery since age of 16! It’s only her who is 21 and still a Virgin, but she always thought her husband had all the right, which is Maan, than why she was refusing now. What he must be thinking? Why should she care? Curse is still there, she will not have love from her husband, pleasure of body and child, that’s what Indian men wants!

For Geet consuming wasn’t that important, maybe it’s for him, but not for her! And what type of family is this? Geet questioned her self again? Who talks about another couple private life? And she does not even know her to talk so openly about her and her husband’s bedroom affair! Omg!

Geet controlled her anger and steeped in, wondering what’s up with this people. Mother was nice, and Naintara the cunning devil or cunning Devil the Naintara.

She walked in, Maan was standing with some file… She wondered was he about to consummate there relation! Now! She fearfully looked at him, than down, than up again.

Maan!’ Geet called out. She wanted to confess her thought before he takes her to bed.
yes…’ he dropped his folder, spinning around.
I know w-hat you probably thinking…’ she came straight to the point.
you do?’ Maan confusingly questioned.
yes! & I don’t have any plan to-‘ Geet lost her words of how to put the word I don’t want to have sex with you!
‘I think we should start to make our way!’
start!’ Geet widens her eyes… Looking at the bed that laid across the other side. Still covered in fresh red rose smell…
‘let’s go…’
Geet gulped her saliva with fear building within. Was he about name there relation with shame. Oh it’s to bright the sun is still out there… At least at night it’s dark.
now?’ Geet questioned again to double check…

‘yes… We have to… Than why wait?’

Who said we have to? Geet questioned her self again. She was just about to make her way to the bed when a loud knock froze her foot step. It was no other than Naintara. Maan excused him self out, indicating he will be back to Geet.

‘bhabi-ji…’ Naintara smiled mischievously. ‘how was the night… I mean first night in our house?’

Devil Naintara… Geet mumbled. ‘it was alright!‘ she smiled with a loud answer.

‘good! I have a gift for you!’ she took out a wrapped around box, reasonably big. Geet smiled and accepted.
‘open!’ naintara insistes.

Geet looked at the red rapper, and slowly opened the pack, but soon as she saw the package of the product her eyes flew open. In embarrassment her face became red and her leg started to shake. She couldn’t even look up to her eyes…

‘condom hi…’ nt smiled…



Posted by on January 19, 2013 in Repulsive


16 responses to “repulsive part 3

  1. Dsonia

    January 19, 2013 at 10:10 pm

    Awesome update…..
    Loved it…..
    Continue soon….
    Eagerly waiting….[8->]

  2. suzie

    January 20, 2013 at 12:05 am

    simply awesome update
    thanks dear

  3. trs1391

    January 20, 2013 at 12:24 am


  4. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 20, 2013 at 3:24 am

    that it i am going to punch nt she is such a witch poor geet is read to run from that crazy house loved the update awesome

  5. ushankitvc

    January 20, 2013 at 4:46 am

    awesum…hate NT…maan didnt even know she is a medical student….gr8 tradition…..what is maan upto??? i think he is taking hr fr paghphere rasm…..continue soon….

  6. Anonymous

    January 20, 2013 at 5:00 am

    Naintara can’t change ;).
    Nice update šŸ™‚

  7. sirisha

    January 20, 2013 at 5:06 am

    šŸ™‚ awesume … waiting

  8. Ayesha

    January 20, 2013 at 6:50 am

    Superb update….till now no proper communication btwn maneet hope evrry thing goes well…

  9. tichluvgurti

    January 20, 2013 at 9:05 am

    yep woop woop i m comenting for teh first time
    i read it in one go, though i read part 1 first then again all 3
    I m just hooked with the story
    gal u r creating a history again šŸ˜‰
    i just lovedddddddddddddddddddddd it
    u said u have 20 part na??
    give it na pullejjj i just can’t stop reading more n more..

    Maan doesn’t knew anything about her,
    and Geet just married for her mum n grand mum,
    yeah India still has the custom to marry off girls without knowing much about boys
    trust me on that, i have seen enough
    but girls also excepted this as thei rdestiny
    i don’t know how they except it

    hope Geet will find her lover in maan
    and maan give her all happiness…

    thanks for sharing the links dear, it was really helpful
    and carry on the ff fast, i m loving this…

    muahhh love u :* šŸ˜€

    • firesafirefiree

      January 20, 2013 at 2:35 pm

      thank you so much for the lovely comment it means allot.. and hehe lets see what happens

  10. crazydream

    January 20, 2013 at 2:36 pm



    Maan knowing Geet as a medical student. He is impressed. Nt teasing her a lot which Geet didn’t like.
    Maan snapping away which nobody cared. Geet surprised to see this

    Geet thinking abt physical relation. Trying to talk to Maan abt it. Me wondering where Maan is taking her.

    Condom.. Geet shocked to see it.

    Continue soon.

  11. Madhuri

    January 20, 2013 at 2:51 pm

    omg…dinner part was awesome….maan did not know that she is a medical student…then definately does not know that she is leaving on friday…
    omg kya nt hai…ek bhi chance nahi chhodati…

    what maan wanted to do with geet…what he is planning…

    omg nt gave condoms as a gift…lol…

    lovely part dear

    cont soon

  12. seemamary

    January 20, 2013 at 5:54 pm

    I didn’t understand what maan wanted to do with geet.

  13. ritzy09

    January 21, 2013 at 12:35 pm

    Not getting Maan’s intnet or even for that matetr fmaily dynamics either…hope to know more as story rpogresses….

  14. 123fiza1

    February 9, 2013 at 9:01 pm

    lol it was nice…nt is a devil……


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