Repulsive part 9

24 Jan

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from geet….

   jee rahi thi

                  mein apni zindagi
                    bina kissi ke saath ke
                  aur jo ho mere liye ,bahut khaas
                  aur ab jab
                    aaya hai zindagi mein koi 
                 dene mera saath
                   par phir bhi ,yeh mera dil
                      kyu nahi de raha gawaahi
                 k yahi hai woh
                      jo hoga  mere liye bahut khaas


from maan

tumhe apna bana luga mein

                        yeh kasam meine khai hai
                     khatam kar duga ,apne pyaar se
                       tere dil mein jo ruswaai hai
                        tu meri hai
                     haan , bas meri hai
                       issi ek baat ne to di mein 
                          yeh aas jagaayi hai
                    tu aasma se aayi
                            koi pari hai
                     jo bahaar ban ke 
                      meri zindagi mein aayi hai
                  ab yeh zimedaari hai meri
                      ke khatam kardu har kami
                    jo andheera ban kar tere dil mein 
                  tune basaayi hai



Geet drank the shot of whiskey all in one go with joya. And before she knew… The whole club was spinning. She couldn’t stand on her feet, let alone stand still somewhere!
She shook her head, than giggled little than looked back at the crowed below.

‘I think we should enjoy now!’ both girl screamed and ran to the dance floor. Geet could barely stand still as she was pushed from her one friend to another. She wasn’t sure what was going on with her, however, she just could t stop giggling. Ron managed to locate her and nicely asked her to dance.

‘will you dance with me?’ he rests his hand against her waist, slowly pulling her cross him.
‘I don’t see any reason for a no!’ Geet giggled and spines her hand around Ron. Slowly gliding her body way.
‘you are a very good dancer!’ Geet mumbled in her drank state. ‘wish I could dance like you! But nop! Bad luck to me, apparently I always used to cry in dance class! So my patents had to take me way!
‘too bad ! You dancing perfectly fine!’ Ron smiled…

Geet looked at Ron, than looked way to find joya. She could barely stand let alone dance. It was Ron’s support that made her dance.
‘zees! You are very drank!’ Ron looked at drowsy Geet.
‘no! No I am not!’ she claimed like a child.
‘you very are!’ he laughed and brought her even close, but the way he jerked only reminded her of Maan. The way he jerked her in bed and in matter of no time she started to hallucinate… She looked at Ron few times… Shaking her head, than shaking her eyes. His face slowly transferred in to Maan… She slowly mumbled Maan however due to the loud music, nothing entered his ear. She smiled and hugged him tight…
‘when did you come?’
Ron looked at Geet in confusion… He loved the hug… God knows how many night he was dreaming have such passionate hug from Geets side and for him self. Oh god! Was it really the truth… He embraced her even close. Geet smiled…
‘I am feeling so dizzy… Please take me home!’ she mumbled…
Ron smiled at her, pulling her chin up… Anything you want.
He picked her up in his arm, and she was in fainting state when Zara caught them. They were nearly out to there car

‘where are you taking her?’
‘my house!’
Zara gave one of her most disgusting look at Ron. ‘put her down! Put her down! Right now!’

Geet looked at Zara… Than at Ron. Who she still thought its Maan.
‘do you know what he was about to do with you!’

‘Excuse me! Before telling me, she is the one who suggested me to take her!’ ron angrily replied to zara

Zara rolled her eyes. Pulled Geet way… What were you thinking? You are married!

Geet looked at Zara in confusion… ‘per… That’s Maan. My husband na. Why shouldn’t I go with him?’ she innocently looked at Zara.

Zara banged her head and forgot, when she is drank, she hallucinate…
‘omg Geet. He is RON. Not your husband. He is in India. Remember!’

Geet pulled a face. Wondering how that could be. Because she just saw him… As she turned around it was back with Ron’s face. She widens her eyes and held her head.

‘lets go home!’ zara annoyingly pulls her.

It was 3 am when they managed to come back. Geet was straight to bed so was Zara.

Next morning when Geet woke up about 5pm. She could barely remember anything. Her hand instantly came to her head, wondering what have happened.
‘here! Take this: you will feel better!’
‘oh… I told you I don’t want to drink! Ugh! Now see!
Zara laughed. ‘you nearly went with Ron to his house to have cosy night!’

‘WHAT?’ Geet shockingly looked at Zara.
Geet angrily looked down in shame. She did not even spend a night with her husband, than how can she even think about spending a night with some idiot?….
‘yes… & I think you two kissed in disco to!’ Geet instantly with guilt looked at her self… You were hallucinating Ron with Maan!’

Geet silently went in deep thought. A guilt did not take long to smack her… She was imagining her husband… That’s just a excuse but she still were hugging him. Taking pleasure out of a stranger! Geet ran in to the bathroom, bruising her teeth and mouth like never before, trying to remove all the guilt. ‘it’s disgusting! Yak! Yak! Yak!’ she mumbled throughout as she took shower…

Another two weeks have passed. She probably spoke to Maan once after the exam, but he seemed off. Like he didn’t want to talk to her. Geet confusingly looked at her phone. Wondering had this gap distanced there relationship. Because he promised to come to see him, however he haven’t! He didn’t at all… Somewhere she was pleased and somewhere she expected this. Marriage is all about kids & desire! He probably had some other girl to fulfill his desire in her absence. Not everyone is like her, who would protect and look after them self just for there husband! She pulled a face and threw her phone on the bed. Wondering what was the matter!

Geet walked out of the shower after awkward conversation with maan, he did not even say a hi properly, let alone ask how she way. It was 12 midnight. She knew at india it  would be around 6! Geet quickly changed in to her short and a loos top. Her leg was tired specially after a very tiring day. She clime up on her bed, and picked her phone up to call back home. She rang her mum and dad first whose question was as usual very similar.

Geet pulls a face and cuts the call. Feeling little lonely… And decided to call maan back. He must be up by now and getting ready….. He answered after few ring.

‘good morning’ his voice sounded lazy. He probably were sleeping.
‘au…. Did I disturb you?’ there were no reply from the other side. Geet plaid with her curl while talking and wondered why he was so quit!
‘umm… Yea!’
‘sorry!’ she replied to him in worry manner.
‘by!’ geet cuts the call. She did not want to disturb him. She  looked around in annoying manner… Why he is so busy at 6! He is probably still in bed! Millions of annoying thought was hunting her that she wanted to ignore. Why was it bothering her so much?



Posted by on January 24, 2013 in Repulsive


33 responses to “Repulsive part 9

  1. dilsay

    January 24, 2013 at 8:32 pm

    thanks for the double update today…
    loved both the updates..
    thank God Ron was stopped by Zoya other wise …..
    I thought may be you are going to bring in Maan …but anyways Maan is trying to give her some space …and Geet looks missing Maan …so is it love or something else

  2. punam2712

    January 24, 2013 at 8:39 pm


  3. chandpooj

    January 24, 2013 at 9:31 pm

    Maan so cool , is he annoyed?

  4. anu

    January 24, 2013 at 9:49 pm

    Lovely update

  5. Anonymous

    January 24, 2013 at 10:19 pm

    Awesome. Can’t wait next part.thanks for updating for us:)

  6. Pam Kaur

    January 24, 2013 at 10:40 pm

    Love it brilliant anticipating Maan’s return I think he’s heard something about geet and is mad at her well done keep it up

  7. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 24, 2013 at 11:39 pm

    awesome update but why do i have a feeling maan saw her kissing ron awesome update geet drunk and almost went home with ron glad her friends were looking out for her awesome update

  8. trs1391

    January 25, 2013 at 12:05 am


  9. Anonymous

    January 25, 2013 at 12:15 am

    Hi just amazing

  10. soma

    January 25, 2013 at 1:04 am

    geet u started feeling fr him………….u started loving maan………but why man is behaving like dis…..i think he is in london only n giving space to geet……….its my guess only……..

    awesome n beautiful update…

    loved it very much…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update…

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt…

    continue soon plz…

  11. lynnkaur94

    January 25, 2013 at 2:10 am

    Awesome update. what’s wrong with Maan?

  12. audiwalia

    January 25, 2013 at 2:40 am

    Why maan is behaving weired with her…… Don’t tell m he is in london or may he is appoineted someone who is keeping eye on her or may be camera’s….

  13. kashish

    January 25, 2013 at 3:01 am


  14. Nandy

    January 25, 2013 at 3:18 am

    Loved it

    Geet started to have feeling for maan?

    I’m enjoying it

  15. kavita

    January 25, 2013 at 3:27 am

    get miss maan
    ab aayegaa mazaa

  16. suzie

    January 25, 2013 at 3:59 am

    thanks for double updates
    uff i’m glad zara save geet from Ron
    wonder what is wrong with maan is he spying geet
    superb update

  17. Shruthi

    January 25, 2013 at 4:16 am

    It was a very nice chapter. Thank goodness! Zara came in time and stopped Geet from going with Ron. Poor girl was all drunk and hallucinating! I wonder what’s up with Maan, he seems to be so rude to her. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon 🙂

  18. ns

    January 25, 2013 at 5:19 am

    Why do I have a very strong feeling that either maan is in London ever since geet came here, or has cameras installed in the house to stay close to her that way and he is just giving her some space to accept him and their marriage but is now annoyed with what geet did at the disco….continue soon….its turning out to be very interesting story….anyways dear great update….

  19. angelickushi

    January 25, 2013 at 6:18 am

    loved the updates….i feel that maan might know abt her make out session and he must be mu her as cheating eagerly waiting to know maan’s side of story

  20. crazydream

    January 25, 2013 at 7:12 am

    Geet totally talli. Imagining Maan for Ron. This means she misses him. Oh she was abt to go wid Ron. Thank God Zara saved her. I thought Maan wud cum there.
    Geet ashamed of her act. Calling Maan. But his mood is off. She can’t understand y???
    She secretly wishes Maan wud cum. Maan talking as if he is not interested to talk to her. I think he understood that she doesn’t want to takk to him. Ab kya hoga. Hope Geet ko thoda brains aa jaye. She has ti do sumthing fr this relationship to work. Sirf Maan hi thodi karta rahega.

  21. Amruta Joshi

    January 25, 2013 at 7:32 am

    both updates are amazing..
    Geet’s hallucinating Maan is too Good..

  22. Pooja

    January 25, 2013 at 8:04 am

    thanx for double update
    i think maan had seen geet dancing with ron so cozily dats y he is behaving like this or maybe some other reason..

  23. Sona

    January 25, 2013 at 8:08 am

    wowwww awesome update dear…
    nishu mindblowing poem muahhhhhhh

  24. maanmaniac

    January 25, 2013 at 8:17 am

    Oh God,thanks to Zara,otherwise we dont know what Geet wud’ve done in drunken stateg

    And Maan,clearly looks he’s upset.

    Pls bring him in the picture buddy.Missing him madly.

  25. ushankitvc

    January 25, 2013 at 8:27 am

    awesum updt…thank god zara came on time…having a strong doubt abt maan knowing abt khushi-ron…must be he saw them kissing….and so he is disturbed and angry….continue soon …..

  26. zariya

    January 25, 2013 at 9:59 am

    geet inclined towards maan but y maan is cold towards her?

  27. tia

    January 25, 2013 at 10:03 am

    yuck yuck me hate ron n want to break his bones how dare he touch my maanu ki geet.
    n get dont b gulty u didnt kiss him its opnly maanu’s adhikaar r8 u knoie… wink
    bt y maanu didnt come n where he is busy so much that he dont have time 4 geet
    gr me feel like banging my herad
    bt want to thax zara she came at r8 time nhi toh babaji iss ron ki toh mai.
    bt geeo to know geet was expecting maanu in her drowsy state lol….

  28. seemamary

    January 25, 2013 at 10:44 am

    Iam not understanding maan’s weird behavior to geet as want to see maan with geet soon in their new house.

  29. Ru

    January 25, 2013 at 11:40 am

    Ron u r so dead man!! i’m gonna killed u..thak god zoya cum their
    OMG!! Why Maan is so clod with her? and now she hallucinating him
    but maans behiveour confusing
    can’t wait for more….next update soon

  30. Khwaishfan

    January 25, 2013 at 5:27 pm

    Ron is love wid Geet ! Geet thinks Ron is Maan! She is drunk! Zoya tells her wat happend! She feels guilty! Maan n Geet talk less! Update soon! Well written

  31. madhuri53

    January 27, 2013 at 9:39 am

    Thank god zara came to save geet from ron
    So geet started missing maan and hallucating him

  32. spvd

    January 27, 2013 at 2:10 pm

    part 9
    oh ho…….
    did Maan come there?
    she imagined Ron as Maan……….
    glad her friend saved her………

    Deepa (spvd)

  33. aarthireddy

    May 9, 2013 at 4:03 pm

    hey hiiiiiiiiiiiiii….
    i cant get to read seduction parts from your blog ..where is it…
    can u plzz give the link to me…


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