Repulsive part 10

25 Jan

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Another two weeks have passed and her conversation to maan went from minimal to nothing. Geet sat in middle of her room, packing her cloths. Every holiday she gets ready to leave for home, but this holiday she is on her way to her husband house. The feeling was odd somewhere. She does not even know that family very well except probably her mother in law, barely seen maan’s dad around. Geet pulled a face as she closed and locked her luggage.



Geet walked out of the airport to see Maan. But in her luck he wasn’t there, it was her mother in law. She smiled and walked up to her with a hug. Geet tries to bend down to touch her feet.
‘no! No… After so long. and it’s unfair holiday for only 4 weeks?’
‘I know- but it’s better than last 4 days…’ Geet smiled. Geet looked around for Maan… But he wasn’t there. She in embarrassment looked down. ‘oh… Maan…’
‘he couldn’t come. He had a urgent meeting to interview some clint. He is looking for someone for his production house! His new business I guess! I really don’t know!’ Avantika smiled and walked out from the airport with Geet.

There house still looked the same. Except color… And different design and decoration. Geet walked in to her bedroom and was little taken back with a huge photo of her and maan’s wedding day hanging elegantly. Furthermore there were few other photo scattered across the room and one big one opposite to there bed. She never looked that pretty in real life compare to how she looked at those photos of her and Maan. Geet looked at the bed, the patten have changed but all she remembered was there few nights on this bed. She wondered if they will do it to night. Last time she wasn’t ready… But yes, she is ready now. Mentally mature… And thinking like a wife! A bit! Maybe! Geet bit her lips…. She have given her enough time to prepare her self to face him this holiday. Was she correct to think like this? Geet wondered. Her confusing mind was not solving anything, it’s up to maan now to answer her.

After having lunch… Geet was straight to bed. The changing time and shifting of day and night only made her tires and she wasn’t exactly sure how her time went when she woke up next day at 10 am.
Geet felt refresh… And Maan was gone. He was there… Next to her because the bed looked messy on the other side. Did he scoop her in his embrace like he did in there first week? She wondered. But her cloths were intact. Geet looked at her self to make sure everything about her body was fine.
After giving out all the gift she brought for everyone… She slowly wondered around her room than in maan’s work office. Everything was scattered around his desk. She did not want to touch, just incase she messes everything up instead of cleaning. He looked well build up with his work and hell of lot to do!
Morning turned in to evening and she actually arrived from london yesterday… Whole night went by, than the day… But still there were no Maan. Geet went to the kitchen to help Avantika… But instead she found devil Naintara. In past 3 months, she Completely forgot about her… But her evil face. Geet cursed her self to walk in hair. Now what advisee she have for her? How to do different variety of sex position? Geet almost laughed at that thought. Not that she wanted to imagine but she was truly desperate.

‘Oh it’s Geet. So… How was your vacation. 3 long months of course…’ NT spoke in an annoying manner. She eyed her disgustingly up and down with little mockery in her eyes.
‘This is my vacation… Not past three months!’ Geet corrected her. Annoingly looking way from her face.
‘No-No… I don’t think you understood. This is your home and staying way from home is call vacation!’ NT slowed her speech down in contradictory manner.
Geet started to chop vegetable as she looked up. ‘whatever you want to think bhabi!’
‘have you seen Maan yet?’
‘Tut Tut… Bechara. I mean what man can tolerate wife staying way for 3 months, way from home! Is everything alright between you two?’

Geet bit her lips. She haven’t even seen him, than how she suppose to know. And why is it so important for her to poke her nose in there relationship?

‘umm… Why it wouldn’t be!’ geet smiled with a reply.

‘No… ‘ Naintara started to spin a big wooden spoon in the pan full of curry and with a smirk she looked at Geet from the side. ‘you know… It’s been three months… May-be you-can control- but can debarji… I mean I saw few girls… With him… Home… Late-night…’

Geet stopped chopping her vegetable instantly! Her heart rate increases in random direction… However wasn’t the same subject was ringing in her head as well. If he couldn’t get satisfaction through her… He obviously going to look for someone els. Geet looked way. She was extreamly annoyed. Why her thought before sounded stupid and silly and same thing from NT’s mouth sounded fine, but a certain anger started to build within her.

‘Now…’ devil Naintara opened her mouth again. ‘Now you can’t put all the blame on debarji… After all his wife isn’t home! I mean before marriage is another thing but now… Isn’t husband should be the first priority for any girls…’ she smiles. ‘so I wouldn’t blame him for anything… Now look at me… You see I don’t give my husband a chance to go anywhere!’

Geet didn’t say a single word, after she chopped all the vegetable she left instantly. Annoyed and fuming with anger. There must be some truth. She does not know this family enough let alone her husband. Who….. Geet stopped by her door. ‘Who is still an stranger but wasn’t this her fault? Why is it her fault?’ geet annoyingly asked her self. Her family who gave her a untrustworthy husband!

She walked in, sat at one of the red sofa with irritation. Than she looked at the bed, Naintara mentioned that- this room… This bed. She felt cheated somewhere… Annoyed that with that same hand he will be touching her tonight probably.
She is facing wars than her all grandma and mother. She is living a pure hell, where husband spends night with girls in her absence! Geet looked way from her wedding photo… She wanted to tear them apart and didn’t want to look pretty… Geet could imagine there laughing while having sex with her husband!

Geet ignored everything and concentrated on her holiday. She couldn’t even cry, and why would she? She doesn’t even love him. She was fool to think he will be a faithful husband. She should have known that all men are the same. Who only merry for kids & family… A perfect wife who would shut up at one corner of the house… Have sex when a husband wants to and and look after kids, while he enjoys!

Geet felt disgusting… She wanted to walk out of that house now. Let alone see Maan now… She controlled her anger. About 7, dinner time Maan came by. He was having dinner when Geet walked down. She have been here nearly two days and Maan barely spoke to her. Of course, are there any reason? He only wanted her at night time… Geet looked at Maan once than down at her plate. Geets father in law smiled…. Who seemed very nice but innocent face can deceive you like her husband.



Posted by on January 25, 2013 in Repulsive


42 responses to “Repulsive part 10

  1. crazydream

    January 25, 2013 at 2:10 pm

    Yuppie me first.
    Geet Cuming to India. Sad that Maan didn’t turn up at Airport. Thinking abt her n Maan’s relation. Uff Naintara uska peecha nahi chodegi. Filling Geet’s brain wid all the rubbish. Geet now hating Maan. She doesn’t think y she feels bad if she is not in luv. They need to have a good convo tabhi all mu will go.

  2. Sona

    January 25, 2013 at 2:10 pm

    ufffffff i wana kill this NT grrrrrrrr.
    awesome update dear.

  3. anu

    January 25, 2013 at 2:10 pm

    Nice part
    Again geet confused with her thots, how she reacts with maan
    Waiting for maaneet interaction now

  4. cyums

    January 25, 2013 at 2:17 pm

    Whats wrong with maan????:O

  5. Ayesha

    January 25, 2013 at 2:23 pm

    Amaxing update….
    Loved it….
    NT telling geet all crap…..waiting fr sm maneet moments….

  6. dilsay

    January 25, 2013 at 2:31 pm

    was waiting for the update since early morning lol…
    My thinking was after the phone call Maan would be in London oops !
    Now you left cliff hanger Geet is angry and Is maaan ready to move forward …
    continue soon

  7. pinkybedi

    January 25, 2013 at 2:34 pm

    A vry nice n different flavour ………….
    Manns character yet 2 b defined ………..surprised what hppened to him………
    dear try giving a longer updatess………..or post two at a time………….lol………..u always hang u on the cliff………..waiting anxiously for the next update………..

  8. Shresta

    January 25, 2013 at 2:36 pm

    Awesome update dear! Feeling bad for geet but she should have related to the production company that her MIL mentioned when NT mentioned abt the girls

  9. Ash

    January 25, 2013 at 2:55 pm

    hey keya…lovely update but this devil naintara..grrrr wish geet cud hve chopped her along with the veggies too!! but yeah mystery still surrounds maan,…me curious to know as to why he is behaving like a wierdo!!!!! and geet..poor her..she actually lost all hope of getting loved by her hubby! hope this stupid MU gets cleared soon!
    continue super soon ❤
    love u loadssssss :* ❤

  10. zariya

    January 25, 2013 at 3:03 pm

    poor geet
    she was indeed right how can she give herself to a stranger.
    n NT is telling her that his husband with other girls
    waiting for pov

  11. Pooja

    January 25, 2013 at 3:06 pm

    awesome update
    yaar ye NT apna muh kholti hi kyun hai??
    and what happen to maan??

  12. chandpooj

    January 25, 2013 at 3:08 pm

    lovely update

  13. Eza's sk.

    January 25, 2013 at 3:13 pm

    Hate this NT… 😦 😦
    okk checking ur blog for the first time…
    Quite oweome and so many widgets 🙂 😀
    its fun to be here 😀

  14. ns

    January 25, 2013 at 3:19 pm

    Finally geet is back and getting a dose of her medicine….she was ignoring her husband and now he is ignoring her but why is maan behaving so weird and aloof…if he is not liking something then why is he not confronting geet but ignoring her….don’t tell me that maan is having an affair because that should not happen….i am so confused and scared of maan’s behaviour…..continue soon!!

  15. nostalgic_soul

    January 25, 2013 at 3:22 pm

    nicely written,waiting for the next part.

  16. ushankitvc

    January 25, 2013 at 3:29 pm

    awesum…maan is so confusing….is he a casanova???poor geet…so confused…hate nt…continue soon….plzz clarify the maan character…..

  17. audiwalia

    January 25, 2013 at 3:34 pm

    Can’t believe on NT…… But wats wrong wid maan in first days he can’t keep hand frm geet but now he is noy seems to interested in her???? Strange did he heard geet nd zara’s conversation or something eles happened??? He was not in london right?Maan confused me totally???

  18. Shruthi

    January 25, 2013 at 3:52 pm

    It was a very nice chapter. It would have been better if Geet hadn’t come at all I mean, after coming back to her sasural she has to put up with all this nonsense right from her husband to Naintara. And God knows if what Naintara was saying about Maan being with other girls was the truth or not 😦 Anyway, looking forward to reading the next chp. Update soon 🙂

  19. trs1391

    January 25, 2013 at 3:54 pm


  20. kavita

    January 25, 2013 at 3:55 pm

    yeh naintaraa apnaa habit nahii chhorty

  21. seemamary

    January 25, 2013 at 3:56 pm

    Waiting to see maaneet talking with each other, hope their MU gets cleared.

  22. maanmaniac

    January 25, 2013 at 4:02 pm

    Well I dont think things gonna be good pretty soon with Geet imagining all sought of rubbish.If Maan wanted to cheat her wat was d need to put life size photos of their wedding.

    Its getting interesting,but Maan still nowhere.

  23. Ru

    January 25, 2013 at 4:08 pm

    Hell wit this NT…Urghhh!! ron cum that jo ye NT bhi grrrrrrr
    but geet’s fault..hw cud she think abt maan like that

  24. Kathrina Pheonix (dumas)

    January 25, 2013 at 4:22 pm

    this bitch nitara filling geet head and well geet she just beliving everything the girl is waiting for her marriage to break instead of trying to get to know her husband he is giving her space and she is giving him more awesome update

    • Anonymous

      January 25, 2013 at 4:32 pm

      maan is giving her time.. he doesnt looklike a cheater..

  25. fiano1

    January 25, 2013 at 4:37 pm

    why maan is beaving so wired
    this naintara i feel kicking out to the hell
    stupid thought had crowded in geet mind
    it not also her fault….which she had seen in real life

  26. Teju

    January 25, 2013 at 4:43 pm

    That was shock.. Hate this NT.. Poor Geet her heart will be broken.. But what was reason behind Maan’s indifference for Geet… Itana kya busy ho gaya jo biwi se baat karane ka bhi waqt nahi.. huun..

  27. Dsonia

    January 25, 2013 at 4:50 pm

    Awesome update
    Loved it
    Geet is confused…… Maaneet’s interaction…
    How that be???
    Continue soon
    Waiting eagarly

  28. kashish

    January 25, 2013 at 5:02 pm


    • Chetna

      January 25, 2013 at 5:25 pm

      Hi dear..Geet back in India…Maan is nt der! Geet wondering! Hate NT! Nw Geet thinks Maan is cheating! Update soon! well written:)

  29. poojaa42

    January 25, 2013 at 6:47 pm

    a le nw only geet started thinking to gv him a chance upar se ye nt errr…again she s back to square one…nd whts wrong with maan…he seems to b avoiding her…did he by any chance kw abt d pub incident with ron…loving it…do continue…

  30. punam2712

    January 25, 2013 at 7:38 pm

    why is maan ignoring her
    she came after 3 months
    and this gives a chance to nt to spew venom and make geet more insecure

  31. Aniee H Anshra

    January 25, 2013 at 7:43 pm

    loved it
    u r doing good job with the story
    waiting for more

  32. soma

    January 25, 2013 at 9:34 pm

    wh nt is lying…………n geet knwing her also becoming angry on geet……….

    awesome n wonderful update…

    loved it very much…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update…

    waiting eagerly fr d nt prt…

    continue soon plz…

    • Anonymous

      January 25, 2013 at 11:09 pm

      Awesome. It’s only 8 part more no please make longer:)

  33. dania hanif

    January 26, 2013 at 5:53 am


  34. dona86

    January 26, 2013 at 9:35 am

    awesome update
    geet came to india for holidays
    this NT grrr
    why maan avoiding her??????????

  35. Pam Kaur

    January 26, 2013 at 10:49 am

    So sad waiting for maan

  36. madhuri53

    January 27, 2013 at 9:56 am

    OMg …is that true..that maan with new girls or only nt wnated to tease her….
    Seems his behaviour also changed a bit with geet…
    Dont wnat to imagine cont soon

  37. spvd

    January 27, 2013 at 2:11 pm

    part 10
    nice part………..
    why is Maan behaving like this?
    this NT is irritating………
    did Maan really bring ladies?

    Deepa (spvd)

  38. sushmaya3

    March 10, 2014 at 7:47 am

    hey where is part 11,12 and 13

  39. geetreddyv

    October 7, 2016 at 9:25 pm

    I want to read parts from 11th to 14th.
    Plz help


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