Repulsive part 14

03 Feb

hello you peeops…i know u have allot of question and i have answer for you all… bet going to put my long worded answer in one simple sentence… well 2 maybe… 😀

‘do they know one another?’ & ‘its arrange marriage fault’

what a weird weird stuff india have.. like u r not allowed to speak to ur future husband….. u r not allowed to see there face.. blah blah blah.. (i am sorry if i am hurting someone!) & most annoingly when ur parents thinks… oh yea… I KNOW WHATS BEST FOR YOU! UGH…. well we r seeing here… This two couple pauls apart… geet being a free minded girl… and maan… who likes his words to him self…. not bothering to speak to his wife.. again is it his fault.. that he knows his wife for mere week! nop.. its not… it’s simply they r not intrested in this marriage.. however we seeing now geet slowly getting in… but we will read maan’s POV to.. so lets see 😀



Geet went back to her flat, now and than she finds her life so miserable!… Although this whole marriage seemed so weird from the beginning and now this? Yes she was angry at the start, effected somewhere, but thats only because she though he was waiting for her! How wrong can she get?

‘I wonder who cursed me!’ Geet sat on her bed, with leg crossed… Looking at Zara.

‘I curse him or his whole family & yours! Generation after generation! That they will never be happy!’ Zara annoyingly replied to geet. ‘NOW- I surly do not fancy a arrange marriage!’

‘I can’t believe this! Actually believe he is having an affair!’ geet questioned her self more than doubting. The thought did not bother her much as it did few days back. Maybe she accepted the fact!

‘did you see the girl?’ zara questioned.
‘no! I don’t want to see that bitch! + why did he merry me if he is going to have an affair!’

‘do you know what geet, in my opinion you should speak to him…. Maybe its a misunderstanding…. !’
‘no! Only 3 and half months in the marriage and look… Curse already showing its work.what els do I need?….. If he was pure and clean nothing like this would have stepped in & anyway what els I can expect from him, do you remember that I told you about our first few nights, he couldn’t take his hand from a stranger!’

Zara nodes. Agreeing with geet also. ‘he is your husband!’

‘I don’t want a husband! I don’t want his house! I don’t want anything of his! He probably thought lets have a wife for kids!’ geet was agitated with her thought. It was like extra headache over her study. She was so well off before this marriage, no worry, no tension… It was a free life but why she is complaining? She is free here to! There is no maan!

‘you didn’t even have sex with him yet!’ Zara lazily tells her!

‘that’s because he doesn’t want to have kids with me. He probably found the perfect girl of his life!’

Geet annoyingly stood up and walked in to the kitchen, grabbing pots of ice cream and waffle… Eating them in hurry! Zara just nodes her head and leaves to her room.

Geet walked up to her wardrobe and slides open to find her jewleary box. As she were about to walk off, Geet realized that few of Maan’s cloths were missing. She did buy few… Actually she counted them… There were about 3 missing!

Geet annoyingly looks at her door and than in Zara’s room.

‘Zara! Zara!’ she screamed. Zara came running…
‘did any of your bf come in to my room?’

Zara pulled a face!

‘Maans 3 shirts are missing!’ Geet started to eat ice-cream in faster rate.

‘are you sure! Because I am the only one who have been here for past week!’

‘are you sure no one els came in?’ geet wanted to make sure.

‘no! The day you left, after few day I left to, to my aunties house and came back today! Same time as you!’

Geet worriedly sat down. ‘each one of them was my fav! Uff…’

‘I thought you don’t like him!’ Zara questioned Geet!

‘yes… But those shirts! I brought them!… With MY MONEY’

Zara rolled her eyes and walked out. Mumbling… ‘possessive!’

One month turned in to two… Two turned in to three… Three turned in to four and four to five and eventually the end of the year…

Geet haven’t called Maan! And as Maan promised his dad, he didn’t call her either. Which Geet forgot. it was end of the term and Avantika already called few times, wondering when she will be home. Geet didn’t want to go. She didn’t want to be a obstacle for Maan. He can do whatever he wants! She thought… But she can’t openly shout out her and Maan’s problem to anyone! Specially his mum!

Geet’s holiday was three months long. She was dreading the moments and Geet wondered what she will do there! How she should behave with Maan? Specially knowing he is having an affair… It’s probably a year long now!

Geet started to pack her bag. She was annoyed and she didn’t want to go!

‘why don’t you want to go?’ zara questioned.
‘Maan don’t want me to be there!’
‘well, have you considered a divorce yet?’
Geet looked down. bitting her lips. The word divorce never occurred in her head and with that word her heart beats started to rise further…
‘yes Geet! When two people don’t like one another- divorce is the only option! + you never had any sex! So go for it! Talk to him and clear this matter out within this month!’
‘well I leaving… My parents coming to pick me up!’ Zara similed and hugged Geet tight… Before leaving.

Geet waved goodbye to Zara’s family and locked the door when the doorbell rang again… Geet wondered who was it now!

She slowly opened the door and her eyes flew right open. It was Maan…


Posted by on February 3, 2013 in Repulsive


24 responses to “Repulsive part 14

  1. kathrina pheonix (dumas)

    February 3, 2013 at 7:50 pm

    awesome update hope they talked seriously 6 months and they never called each other awesome update loved the update can’t wait for them to talk

  2. Ishrath Parveen

    February 3, 2013 at 7:54 pm

    pls update soon its amazing

  3. Ayesha

    February 3, 2013 at 8:30 pm

    Amazing update….hope maneet talk n try to understand each other…

  4. amber

    February 3, 2013 at 8:58 pm


  5. Pam Kaur

    February 3, 2013 at 11:23 pm

    brilliant hope their honest with eachother can’t wait please hurry and put us out of our misery

  6. soma

    February 4, 2013 at 12:45 am

    atlast maan came…. n m with zara………its mu b/w d two……..

    wonderful update…

    loved it…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update…

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt…

    continue soon plz…

  7. Saro

    February 4, 2013 at 2:13 am

    Super dear maan in london

  8. punam2712

    February 4, 2013 at 5:38 am

    Again at cross purposes. Maan is here and hopefully they will talk now
    Where are the shirts

  9. ushankitvc

    February 4, 2013 at 5:45 am

    awesum…maan came to take her….hope they hav a proper conversation….

  10. Ash

    February 4, 2013 at 6:07 am

    ohh my keya…lovely update..maan finally back with geet….running to read the next part ❤

  11. Salina

    February 4, 2013 at 7:18 am

    Superb,, now going to read nxt part

  12. anu

    February 4, 2013 at 7:27 am


  13. madhuri53

    February 4, 2013 at 8:10 am

    omg….literly they didn’t talk with each other in 6 monhts….zara suggesting geet to take divorce
    Omg maan came to meet her…what happened to his promise to his dad…is he broking or just could not control himself
    Feels like maan came at her house when she was back in india

  14. Shruthi

    February 4, 2013 at 10:04 am

    So a whole year flew by and they didn’t even contact each other. And now Geet has to go back and all of a sudden Maan turns up! That was quiet shocking for a guy who doesn’t even care about her!

  15. zariya

    February 4, 2013 at 10:59 am

    part 14 is so so
    the need to talk n see maan is here

  16. -Ru-

    February 4, 2013 at 11:14 am

    Awesome update keya..Sperbly written

  17. sanjana

    February 4, 2013 at 1:06 pm

    this lack of comm is the prob between the two
    i hope prob solves now as maan is here

  18. maanmaniac

    February 4, 2013 at 6:20 pm

    I really dont know wats gonna happen!!!

    And about arrange marriage…..
    If our country has,suppose 130 crore ppl,then 129.5 crore ppl either willingly opt for arrange willinglyor blackmailed for it.And trust me buddy over 120 crore ppl are happily married.This large % of ppl cant be totally wrong.

    I m not at all against love marriage but all of us arnt lucky enough to get love and marry that person.

    Dont mind,its jst my opinion.

    And abt Maaneet,they need to talk leaving their pride,being open minded doesnt mean assuming things that U want to believe.

    Hoping for d best.

  19. spvd

    February 5, 2013 at 7:36 am

    part 14
    nice part…………
    Maan is here………….
    so Maan had stayed here and used the shirts………..

    Deepa (spvd)

  20. dona86

    February 5, 2013 at 4:35 pm

    nice update

  21. seemamary

    February 5, 2013 at 7:14 pm

    Wonderful part dear, waiting for more….

  22. Anonymous

    February 6, 2014 at 10:42 am

    I want to read Repulsive part 11. Please help as I am not able to get it

  23. Anonymous

    December 9, 2014 at 5:57 pm

    Hey, your story is awesome! Can you guide me to Parts 11, 12 & 13?

  24. vrksharma

    May 3, 2017 at 3:33 pm

    Hi i am unable to find part11, part 12 & part 13 (repulsive)
    Can anybody plz help me out with this


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